Month: May 2016

Into The Valley Of Death

Into the valley of death the sprint started.
You don’t want to be here it’s well guarded.
In this place life cannot be stalk’d.
But now the hell jaws are opened.

Into the valley of death the sprint started.

Listen carefully my dear,

Life cannot be easy here,
If you go you disappear,
Let me borrow your ear,
And listen my dear.

Hey you my dear reader,
You are not your self’s leader,
It is a thousand degrees heater,
to your heart beats it is a speeder,
Into the valley of death the sprint started.Valley

My dear friend it is hubris,
Read history and see what happened to Brutus,
Everyone who acts like that is useless,
You’ll think it is all about ambitious.
In the end of the day it is hubris.

This is an insubstantial world.
The valley is the master,
And you’ll say no word
You’ll be trapped in there,
you will not be heard
Two options, duty or hubris, and no third.

Parsing Sentences

  • Bob have completed his work.
    -Bob= Subject, a proper noun, third person situated.
    -have completed= Verbal phrase, on present perfect, have is the present of the verb to have, completed is past participle of to complete.
    -his work= Object, his is a pronoun that mean something belongs to him, work is a noun and it is the thing that belongs to Bob.
    *The structure of this sentence indicates that Bob completed the work that belongs to him in the past but it is more important in the present and Bob is a third person situated.
  • Caesar is being wrong
    -Caesar= Subject, proper noun, third person situated.
    -is being= verbal sentence, present progressive(continuous), is is the present of to be, being is the verb of to be+ing.
    -wrong=Adjective.
    *The structure of the sentence indicates that Caesar who is a third person situated is doing something which is to be in the real present which is described by the writer as being wrong.
  • Into the valley of death, rode the six hundred
    -Into the valley of death= Into is a preposition, the is a determiner, valley of death is a noun phrase, valley is a noun, of is a preposition, death is a noun, and the whole thing is a prepositional phrase
    -,rode= “,” is a comma which is punctuation, rode is the sentence’s verb.
    -the six hundred= the is a determiner, six hundred is a number phrase six and hundred are numbers, the whole thing is the subject.
    *The structure of the sentence indicates that it is written in early English where it was OK to write on verb subject object. And the six hundred ride in the past so rode into the valley of death which is a metaphor used to describe the valley were 118 soldiers were killed from the charge of the light brigade.

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